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[VRMMORPG] Le Monde Online

Started by tabyk, June 28, 2025, 12:24:46 AM

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tabyk

June 28, 2025, 12:24:46 AM
Something I've been poking at for a while now.  Kind of wrote myself into a corner last year and am still trying to figure out how to get out of it (and how much I may need to re-write).  Mostly just fishing for some basic feedback and likes / dislikes.

Also, hi all!  It's been a while.

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Anastasia

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June 28, 2025, 04:04:14 AM
I'll give it a read tomorrow, when it's not 3 AM my time. What's the story about, by the way?
<Afina> Imagine a tiny pixie boot stamping on a devil's face.
<Afina> Forever.

<Yuthirin> Afina, giant parasitic rainbow space whale.
<IronDragoon> I mean, why not?

Anastasia

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June 29, 2025, 01:48:47 AM
I read the first three chapters and a bit of the fourth. I'm wondering if it's meant to be a slice of life story or if a greater plot is waiting in the wings? My opinion depends on that.
<Afina> Imagine a tiny pixie boot stamping on a devil's face.
<Afina> Forever.

<Yuthirin> Afina, giant parasitic rainbow space whale.
<IronDragoon> I mean, why not?
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