[Haruhi] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi 02

[Brian]

Ha!  Ru!  Hi!

[Anastasia]

I really don't have time to give you the C/C this deserves, so I'll settle for saying 'Awesome'.

[Brian]

That is a comment I can settle for recieving! :D

[Serafita]

Do I detect a Yuki-fanboy?  :D

Lots of planning went into the fic, I can tell, and doesn't matter that much if this is an AU.  :3

Good work on writing the best Haruhi fic to date so far (even if you're competing against like two other badly written fics)  XD

[Brian]

Yuki-fanboy?  Maybe.  More likely, your fanboy-sensor is lying in a broken pile, having been recently overloaded.  8D

I've only seen bad Koizumi/Kyon slash so far, so I'm hoping this turns out, oh, infinitely better.  ;P

Thanks for the feedback!

[Liddo-kun]

Her balls into fists, and she raises them together, bunched
just below her chin as she shrinks in on herself and looks up at me
hopefully, lips pursing ever so slightly.

How... uh... ballsy of her?  ^_^

No, but seriously, Brian, you're doing a solid job of capturing the "feel" of the storytelling style that the canon material uses.  It makes for a very interesting and absorbing read.

Specifically, the parts where Kyon is mentally speaking/analyzing/critiquing made for some humorous moments in the fic for me.  Traitorous fingers!  Why did I type that?!