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The Inn of Last Home...(^'o'^) => Creative Writing Section => Harbringer of Tales => Topic started by: Brian on May 16, 2011, 03:52:23 AM

Title: [Haruhi] At a Glance
Post by: Brian on May 16, 2011, 03:52:23 AM
Because for once, Drac is NOT actually to blame, and that title is like, half of the threads in this forum.  Anyway.

Soilers for, uh, book/season one.  A retake on the original novel.  A little calmer, a little experimental....

...probably a little obvious, but hopefully, despite that, a little fun.  Apologies in advance; I cannot word-wrap text files because I'm too lazy to get 3ft to run correctly in ubuntu or write my own script. >_>;;

So.  Enjoy? :3
Title: Re: [Haruhi] At a Glance
Post by: thepanda on May 18, 2011, 04:10:49 PM
You are my favorite Haruhi series writer, you know that? I figured out the change early on, but it didn't detract from the story. Um, not much else to say, though. It was good.
Title: Re: [Haruhi] At a Glance
Post by: Brian on May 18, 2011, 04:21:07 PM
Aces!

Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Title: Re: [Haruhi] At a Glance
Post by: Jon on May 18, 2011, 05:29:05 PM
I like a human-emulating Ryoko Asakura.
Title: Re: [Haruhi] At a Glance
Post by: Brian on May 18, 2011, 06:00:04 PM
Quote from: Jon on May 18, 2011, 05:29:05 PM
I like a human-emulating Ryoko Asakura.
That's Ryouko all the time!

...ah, but seriously, I felt a little bad about writing her out.  Had to be done, though -- the supernatural had to show up and wave a hand in front of the blind guy before very awkwardly pretending it was a prank. :3