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The Inn of Last Home...(^'o'^) => Creative Writing Section => Harbringer of Tales => Topic started by: Olvelsper on August 09, 2011, 01:03:01 AM

Title: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on August 09, 2011, 01:03:01 AM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7267243/1/Eureka : Or: How I Learned To Stop Worrying and Love Structural Analysis. I basically went to try and do an spin off with a more canon like situation already in place. In this world, Shirou discovers his canonical ability to analyze things to a scary degree.

Science ensues.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on August 09, 2011, 02:01:46 PM
"It was just a pulled hamstring." He mumbled, a bit embarrassed that he had <- the rest of this sentence is missing.

When the part later was disassembled later that day <- Drop the first later.

Shirou glanced at the board he had set up in the tool shed. Beneath it were random scribbled about his thoughts as stepped back from another completed job. <- as he stepped back

Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on August 11, 2011, 01:30:33 AM
Thank you kindly, Panda. Working on corrections now.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on August 11, 2011, 07:22:06 AM
And now I realize I totally forgot to mention I like what I've read so far. The horned girl tickles my memory but I just cannot place it.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Dracos on August 11, 2011, 02:20:37 PM
I couldn't place the summoned servant either.  Who is it?
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on August 11, 2011, 03:41:02 PM
Frankenstein's Monster from Fate/Apocrypha. I'm going to be using a lot of those Servants for this story.

http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Fate/Apocrypha_characters

Here's the link to them if you guys want to look at them.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on August 11, 2011, 08:14:06 PM
Not who I was thinking but still pretty cool. And holy crap, every time I see a new servant I remember how broken these people are. Karna? Alexander? Gilgamesh?
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on August 11, 2011, 08:38:05 PM
St. George is the brokenest.

He turns you into a dragon. Then auto slays you.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on August 11, 2011, 10:19:43 PM
But that's only anti-unit and he has to hit you with it.

Karna shoots homing nukes.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on August 11, 2011, 10:54:01 PM
St. George has an auto life on him, though. He can rush you, burn through the auto life, and then stab you. Mind you, Karna's is easier to do, but like...Fate/Stay Night Berserker is dead against St. George. No matter what.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on August 12, 2011, 08:20:01 AM
But if he gets hit with something that kills you more than once or fights multiple enemies that strategy falls apart. Though I'm not sure if Fate/Zero berserker's noble phantasm machine guns would count. >_>
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on August 12, 2011, 06:27:40 PM
I think the only ones that can multikill are Stay Night Berserker (only with Nine Lives), Stay Night Assassin (with Tsuabame Gaeshi), and Saber with Caliburn.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on September 07, 2011, 06:33:23 PM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7267243/3/Eureka : Eureka 3 is up. I have now more or less set up Fran, so it's time to move on with the plot.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on September 08, 2011, 08:17:36 AM
"...fucking formalcraft, I don't know how it works."

So long as he doesn't ask alchemists. I hear they always be lying and shit.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on September 08, 2011, 07:13:01 PM
Sion is the friendliest alchemist in the series, and she'd simply turn Shinji into her puppet.

So yeah, they're mean.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on September 08, 2011, 08:25:00 PM
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/fcking-magnets-how-do-they-work
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on September 09, 2011, 02:20:56 AM
Hehe. I was pretending I didn't know about the joke since Eureka is pretending at being more 'serious'.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Dracos on September 09, 2011, 02:53:11 AM
Of course we saw the meme.

Sakura needs more coolness.  Broken sakura is sad.

Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on April 07, 2012, 01:34:23 AM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7267243/4/Eureka

Trying to get back into writing again. Sorry for the delay. Inspiration sapped by real life shenanigans.
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: thepanda on April 09, 2012, 10:35:23 PM
Oh, hey! An update!
Title: Re: [Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!
Post by: Olvelsper on May 28, 2012, 12:45:16 AM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7267243/5/Eureka

Update! Now we begin the shenanigans.