Something I've been poking at for a while now. Kind of wrote myself into a corner last year and am still trying to figure out how to get out of it (and how much I may need to re-write). Mostly just fishing for some basic feedback and likes / dislikes.
Also, hi all! It's been a while.
Chapter List (in reverse) (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jMmcMb4_AX_WP5APAJxnytd5HyNtSvipKTVraRwe9OI/edit?usp=share_link)
I'll give it a read tomorrow, when it's not 3 AM my time. What's the story about, by the way?
I read the first three chapters and a bit of the fourth. I'm wondering if it's meant to be a slice of life story or if a greater plot is waiting in the wings? My opinion depends on that.