Soulriders 5.0: Legend of the Unending Games

The Inn of Last Home...(^'o'^) => Creative Writing Section => Writing Section => Topic started by: Kwokinator on September 27, 2004, 04:58:09 AM

Title: Late Night Musings
Post by: Kwokinator on September 27, 2004, 04:58:09 AM
Trying to get some life into this little corner again with my crappy little diddy ^_^

Alone in my room at four,
I stare at my monitor,
My eyes slightly sore.

Is it because I'm tired?
Is it because I'm wired?
Why are my eyes dripping tears?

I've never cared for emotion,
I dislike the very notion;
So please, offer me a solution.

Why does the thought of her name,
Brings to me so very much pain?
This isn't the real me, this is insane.

The man in the mirror that I see,
Is but a shadow of his former glory.

I want to reach into the mirror,
Rip out his heart and squeeze until it explodes,
Beat his head with a bat until his skull implodes,
Then break him apart limb by limb.

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Yeah, yeah, the last stanza wasn't remotely rhyming, so shoot me ;p
Title: Late Night Musings
Post by: Dracos on September 27, 2004, 12:29:29 PM
Go Kwok. =D

Oh wait...shoot you, you say?  *shoots to kill!*

Anyhow, I hear the rhythm, even though it beat to a gothic treat, angsty crap amongst itself, but last verse not repeat.  Anyhow, not so bad. =)

Dracos