Soulriders 5.0: Legend of the Unending Games

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Title: [Slayers][MST] The Hardest Thing
Post by: Ragnar on August 27, 2005, 09:06:31 PM
This is my first "official" MST. I'd be delighted to receive any feedback on it.

Edit: Damn. I'd added it as an attachment, but I see that it doesn't like .htm attachments. And I was looking forwards to the comments ;_;

Alrighty. Find it here. (http://www.geocities.com/mietol/HardestThing.html)
Title: [Slayers][MST] The Hardest Thing
Post by: Edward on August 27, 2005, 09:36:31 PM
It might help to post it first. :)
Title: [Slayers][MST] The Hardest Thing
Post by: Dracos on August 28, 2005, 01:21:54 AM
Well, it is quite succinct. =P

Ragnar, I'll poke you if you don't see this by tomorrow.

Dracos
Title: [Slayers][MST] The Hardest Thing
Post by: Ragnar on August 28, 2005, 04:17:28 PM
Righto, thanks for telling me. Edited appropriately.
Title: [Slayers][MST] The Hardest Thing
Post by: Dracos on August 28, 2005, 04:46:18 PM
mmm, it's okay.  It lacks, I think, a certain snappiness to the performance, but it's not horrible.  Too lazy to really give detailed at the moment beyond that.  Part of the issue is the source material to MST isn't particularly far out crazy stuff to begin with, which helps a lot.

Dracos