It's that time of year again!
The last of the fics I promised Ginrai I would write....
Nice one. I like Hiroshi and Daisuke's characterization. There was a bit of confusion near the end with the forman and Ranma's 'sister' but I eventually got it.
Edit: Was there a part 1 and 2?
I enjoyed it. It was a litttttle rough in the Ukyou explanation bit. You lost me there when you were referencing manga events that I've long forgotten the details of. And it was a little bit too easy... not much resistance in the fic.
But it was cute and sappy and I enjoyed reading it.
Dracos
Panda: Yep!
Part one is here (http://florestica.com/brandall/oneshot/pok/index.htm), and part two is here (http://florestica.com/brandall/oneshot/tif/index.htm).
Glad Hiroshi and Daisuke worked -- those characterizations will be re-used elsewhere.... :D
Drac: Yeah, I know it's sappy ... but that's what it set out to be, so it looks like it worked. :p Thanks!
Yup, I figured such, so didn't give any advice to 'fix' what was clearly intended :)
Dracos
Will comment on later, once I have time to read it. But I wanted to point out that Time Is Funny's URL is http://www.florestica.com/brandall/oneshot/tif/index.htm, so you may want to edit the URL in your new fic to reflect that.