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Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: Brian on June 29, 2006, 10:51:25 PM
Haruhi-ism!

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Now, everyone dance! :D
Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: SabreMau on June 29, 2006, 11:46:53 PM
Just glanced through this, haven't given it a full read yet, but I noticed this at the top:

QuoteIt takes place after episode 13.

Yeah, but so does over half of the series. Might work better with a more narrowed-down statement of at what point in the series(chronologically) it occurs, unless you're specifically referring to it taking place after episode chronological-13-airdate-11 (The Day of Sagittarius).
Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: Brian on June 30, 2006, 12:44:51 AM
You're right; I should be clearer.  I'm not sure of the arc-ing thing, so it's really kind of 'post series'.  It's built after every episode I've seen so far, with guesses as to how ep 14 (the conclusion of Melancholy, I think) works out.
Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: SabreMau on June 30, 2006, 12:49:42 AM
Quote from: "Brian"You're right; I should be clearer.  I'm not sure of the arc-ing thing, so it's really kind of 'post series'.  It's built after every episode I've seen so far, with guesses as to how ep 14 (the conclusion of Melancholy, I think) works out.
Well, so far we've seen episodes 01, 02, 03, 04, 05,     07, 08, 09, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14. So an after-every-episode story would take place after Haruhi and Kyon are walking back in the rain in episode 09(airdate)/episode 14(chronological).
Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: Brian on June 30, 2006, 01:43:54 AM
That is correct. o_o
Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: Liddo-kun on August 09, 2006, 11:16:39 AM
Quote
This is none other than Tanaiguchi, the same one who walked in on
Yuki-san and myself after the unfortunate incident with Ryouko.  
"This is close enough the clubroom," Koizumi whispers to me
suddenly.

Taniguchi.

...to the clubroom.

QuoteI really am getting to complacent, I guess.

Too.

QuoteThose bolts should be much to fast for me to react to.

Too.
Title: [Haruhi][Spoilers] The Blunt Force Trauma of Suzumiya Haruhi
Post by: Brian on August 12, 2006, 07:39:11 AM
Eeeexcellent.  Thank you, Plushie-san, your corrections were quite helpful. :3