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The Inn of Last Home...(^'o'^) => Creative Writing Section => Writing Section => Topic started by: Music-chan on November 12, 2003, 03:55:02 AM

Title: That Not Named
Post by: Music-chan on November 12, 2003, 03:55:02 AM
(I realize the only times I've ever put poetry on here are gone due to the problems.....so here's something new, in case anyone cares.)

That Not Named

Softly, slowly
Let it settle
Around the shoulders,
Like a cloak
Heavy as the night,
Light as the stars,
Warm as the sun,
Chilling as the dawn,
A piece of forever
That sits on my heart
And Dreams

--Rachelle
Title: That Not Named
Post by: Dracos on March 29, 2004, 11:34:19 PM
A bit sudden on the end.  But nice and short and solid thematics and focus throughout.  Yeah, I know, long time for commenting.  But eventually I get around to writing what I think, no?

I should get some more of my own stuff written.  Been too long by far.

Dracos