Apostles in Leather Pants (Tsukihime)

Started by Olvelsper, June 15, 2011, 09:30:45 PM

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Olvelsper

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7083560/1/Apostles_in_Leather_Pants

I've gone ahead and started the sequel to my Wizard Hat series. In this fic, I expand on the Nasuverse by tackling Tsukihime. I'm hoping to have the villian be more fully fleshed out. Zouken was too crazy and corrupted to really do much with by the time the Fifth Holy Grail War started. I hope to import the same action over from my Fate/Stay Night fic to this one.

It's just barely started, but I hope you all enjoy.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

Anastasia

I read the first two chapters of that last night. It looks promising so far, not much else to say quite yet.
<Afina> Imagine a tiny pixie boot stamping on a devil's face.
<Afina> Forever.

<Yuthirin> Afina, giant parasitic rainbow space whale.
<IronDragoon> I mean, why not?

Olvelsper

That's fine. I'm still trying to figure out if the pacing is okay. Some people seemed to want me to hit the ground running on this one too, but Tsukihime needs a bit slower pace to explain some things. It'll pick up soon.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

Anastasia

#3
I think your pace is fine as long as you keep the readers interested.

That's the big catch, of course.
<Afina> Imagine a tiny pixie boot stamping on a devil's face.
<Afina> Forever.

<Yuthirin> Afina, giant parasitic rainbow space whale.
<IronDragoon> I mean, why not?

Olvelsper

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7083560/3/Apostles_in_Leather_Pants : The pace picks up with the new chapter of Apostles in Leather Pants. The tie to Wizard Hat is set up, and I've gone ahead and hinted at ripples down the timeline.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

Olvelsper

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

Olvelsper

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7083560/5/Apostles_in_Leather_Pants

Sorry that it took a while, but here's a new update. Neo Holy Grail War start up-o.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.