[Worm] Discovery

[alethiophile]

So here's a second chapter. I'm most concerned with character voice, again, and pacing.

[Anastasia]

Character voice seems fine, same as last chapter.

Your pacing is okay. The encounter is a little rushed and feels a tad disjointed, but that completely fits what's happening. It's Taylor's first time out and she's making rookie mistakes.

I don't have a lot to say here. I liked it and felt it was solid setup. I'm wondering if Taylor will tango with E88's bigger guns now?