[Sailor Moon] Ami-chan's Bad Day by Ebiris

Started by Anastasia, October 17, 2005, 02:59:08 PM

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Anastasia

http://www.florestica.com/ebiris/oneshot/abdmm/index.htm

This isn't a long fic, so this won't be a long review. Ami-chan's Bad Day is a short one shot fic, detailing a good day gone horribly wrong to Ami. While the story has a few flaws, like unneeded Japanese and a notable lack of descriptions in a few places(Usagi being hit with Ami's Rhapsody was notably thin), it overall does what it needs to. It's funny and amusing, and for a short fic, that's what really matters.
<Afina> Imagine a tiny pixie boot stamping on a devil's face.
<Afina> Forever.

<Yuthirin> Afina, giant parasitic rainbow space whale.
<IronDragoon> I mean, why not?