[Ranma][WAFF] Plain Okonomiyaki III: Order to Go

[Brian]

It's that time of year again!

The last of the fics I promised Ginrai I would write....

[thepanda]

Nice one. I like Hiroshi and Daisuke's characterization. There was a bit of confusion near the end with the forman and Ranma's 'sister' but I eventually got it.

Edit: Was there a part 1 and 2?

[Dracos]

I enjoyed it.  It was a litttttle rough in the Ukyou explanation bit.  You lost me there when you were referencing manga events that I've long forgotten the details of.  And it was a little bit too easy...  not much resistance in the fic.

But it was cute and sappy and I enjoyed reading it.

Dracos

[Brian]

Panda: Yep!

Part one is here, and part two is here.

Glad Hiroshi and Daisuke worked -- those characterizations will be re-used elsewhere....  :D

Drac: Yeah, I know it's sappy ... but that's what it set out to be, so it looks like it worked. :p  Thanks!

[Dracos]

Yup, I figured such, so didn't give any advice to 'fix' what was clearly intended :)

Dracos

[Jason_Miao]

Will comment on later, once I have time to read it.  But I wanted to point out that Time Is Funny's URL is http://www.florestica.com/brandall/oneshot/tif/index.htm, so you may want to edit the URL in your new fic to reflect that.