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Started by tabyk, December 11, 2002, 08:49:57 AM

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tabyk

I stare at the strings attached to my hands
watching as they do their dance
wondering who is controlling them
and if I'll get them back

Now I look behind me
and I see some strings there too
making me jump and wander
where there is work to do

I begin to fear and wonder
if there are strings attached as well
to my very thoughts that write this
but that's assuming I could tell...

~ Tabyk

P.S.:  Yes, I actually wrote this a long time ago (been posted on the various reincarnations of my website over 2 years now), however, I still come back and think about it occasionally...
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Dracos

Interesting cant on it.  It took me a couple of reads to recogize the rhytmic pattern you used when writing it.  Also an interesting thought invoking poem on it's own subject ^_^.

I like.

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