[Haruhi/TVtropes] Kyon: Big Damn Hero

[Brian]

I'm writing a story that crosses the world of Suzumiya Haruhi with the world of TVtropes.

Yeah, I know....  Long story.  Anyway, I'm 14 chapters in.  If you're familiar with the novels ... enjoy!  Otherwise ... enjoy anyway!

I appreciate feedback, buuut....  I don't think that this forum has as many Haruhi fans, so I'm just going to post updates instead of chapters in the fiction forum.

I think that covers it.

http://pishoque.net/brian/fanfic/kbdh/index.htm

[Dracos]

You're crazy.  Absolutely insane.

[Brian]

Why, thank you, Dracly one. :D

[Brian]

An additional chapter (15) has been posting, bringing us to the long-awaited Fanservice Arc.  Higurashi crossover ahoy!

[Brian]

The Fanservice Arc continues.  Chapter 16 is up.  Higurashi crossover plus next-gen cast, full steam ahead!

[Brian]

Moar Fanservice Arc.  Chapter 17 up.  Contains significantly more than your recommended dosage of bathing scenes.

[Brian]

And the Fanservice Arc concludes, leaving Hinamizawa behind.

[Edward]

Interesting.

Chapter 10 -  "On the north end of Honshu, not too far from the Tsugaru straight."

Should be "Tsugaru _strait_"

Chapter 11 - "Mt trial is to learn to take responsibility, not avoid it.  So!  Tell me everything."

Should be "_My_ trial..."

[Edward]

Chapter 12 - "If you had either, I would demand them instantly," the president snapped.  "No go; my patience wears thin."

Should be "_Now_ go...."

[Brian]

Chapter 19 is now up.

Chapter 10 -
Chapter 11 -
Chapter 12 -

Waha~!  Corrections~!  Excellent. :3  Thank you very much for catching those, Mr. Simons!

[Edward]

  "Kyon-nii-sama," Matsuri said, insistently, "you use your powers for good, right?"

"Nope," his sister told her, smirking.  "He uses his powers for awesome! 


Bwahahahaha!

[Edward]

Chapter 18 "Grumbling about the probability of getting his nice borrowed suit dirty, Kyon managed to break into a full at the same time as Haruhi, streaking around the far side of the house. "

Should be - "Grumbling about the probability of getting his nice borrowed suit dirty, Kyon managed to break into a full _run_ at the same time as Haruhi, streaking around the far side of the house. "

[Brian]

Oops, another fine catch.  Thanks, as always, Mr. Simons. :3

[Brian]

Chapter 20 is now up.  As per the author's notes, internet access may be sporadic in the future. o_o

[Edward]

Well, here's hoping things aren't too sporadic. Nice to see the plot developing and characters growing, which is typical for you, but not what you'd expect from something based on TV Tropes. I especially like how timid-Mikuru is starting to grow into the cooler future version.

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Ukyou: With all her training in cooking, I recommend Mikuru learn food-based martial arts
Miruku: I don't think my universe works that way.