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[Fate/Stay Night] Eureka!

Started by Olvelsper, August 09, 2011, 01:03:01 AM

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Olvelsper

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7267243/1/Eureka : Or: How I Learned To Stop Worrying and Love Structural Analysis. I basically went to try and do an spin off with a more canon like situation already in place. In this world, Shirou discovers his canonical ability to analyze things to a scary degree.

Science ensues.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

thepanda

"It was just a pulled hamstring." He mumbled, a bit embarrassed that he had <- the rest of this sentence is missing.

When the part later was disassembled later that day <- Drop the first later.

Shirou glanced at the board he had set up in the tool shed. Beneath it were random scribbled about his thoughts as stepped back from another completed job. <- as he stepped back


Olvelsper

Thank you kindly, Panda. Working on corrections now.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

thepanda

And now I realize I totally forgot to mention I like what I've read so far. The horned girl tickles my memory but I just cannot place it.

Dracos

I couldn't place the summoned servant either.  Who is it?
Well, Goodbye.

Olvelsper

Frankenstein's Monster from Fate/Apocrypha. I'm going to be using a lot of those Servants for this story.

http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Fate/Apocrypha_characters

Here's the link to them if you guys want to look at them.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

thepanda

Not who I was thinking but still pretty cool. And holy crap, every time I see a new servant I remember how broken these people are. Karna? Alexander? Gilgamesh?

Olvelsper

St. George is the brokenest.

He turns you into a dragon. Then auto slays you.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

thepanda

But that's only anti-unit and he has to hit you with it.

Karna shoots homing nukes.

Olvelsper

St. George has an auto life on him, though. He can rush you, burn through the auto life, and then stab you. Mind you, Karna's is easier to do, but like...Fate/Stay Night Berserker is dead against St. George. No matter what.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

thepanda

But if he gets hit with something that kills you more than once or fights multiple enemies that strategy falls apart. Though I'm not sure if Fate/Zero berserker's noble phantasm machine guns would count. >_>

Olvelsper

I think the only ones that can multikill are Stay Night Berserker (only with Nine Lives), Stay Night Assassin (with Tsuabame Gaeshi), and Saber with Caliburn.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

Olvelsper

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7267243/3/Eureka : Eureka 3 is up. I have now more or less set up Fran, so it's time to move on with the plot.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.

thepanda

"...fucking formalcraft, I don't know how it works."

So long as he doesn't ask alchemists. I hear they always be lying and shit.

Olvelsper

Sion is the friendliest alchemist in the series, and she'd simply turn Shinji into her puppet.

So yeah, they're mean.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2589971/Ol%27Velsper : Then we will write in the shade.