[Haruhi] K:BDH chapter 61

[Peng]

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ch01: Was this is his unsubtle way of saying he wanted to be a star in the next movie, not just a camera man?
ch02: There's more trust between us then than there was ... and that's very likable.
ch06: It's a behavior issue, but all accounts indicate you acted in self defense, or in defense of a classmate.
ch07: Manabe was bowing nervously to the man behind the desk, a thirtish thirtyish looking Yakuza in proud color, much more understated white and powder blue.
ch07: Kyon set every drive but the primary to quick format, waited until they were done, then opened the system while it was still running,
ch09: Most of the Tsuruya estate was a single floor, baring barring any scary basements Kyon was happy not to know about,
ch10: Would Sempai like Kanae-chan more if she refered referred to herself in the third person?
ch11: But if your entire argument is an appeal to surrenduring surrendering to emotions, then you fail completely to understand what a system of law is for.
ch12: "They don't That doesn't sound familiar,"
ch12: But Masao had persevered, and Iyouji had happily preserver-ed persevered along with him.
ch12: Watanabe was recovering in a hospital, and only two of his immediate subordinates was were still in good condition, escaping with just stun gun charges.
ch12: Masao growled, his friendly demeanour demeanor vanishing for a moment before he recovered it, though his cheer was much diminished.
ch15: So when she found a strange girl, as ethereal as herself watching Kyon and his sister, she had to do something about it.
ch16: The reason for being punished here, before the statue of those the one who they thought was Oyashiro-sama, was to spare them Oyashiro-sama's curse.
ch16: It was an ugly and simple matter to murder two people, and ensure that only one body was found, then blaming blame it on the god....
ch17: After that came the unpleasant warning that Kyon's parents would be arriving sometime in the evening after the fishing trip, which caused Kyon to nod solemly, solemnly, and Haruhi to make a mental note to be nowhere nearby when it happened.
ch18: Well, okay, she had let some thing something slip that she shouldn't have, but she'd only ever promised not to tell Haruhi.
ch18: Haruhi wasn't looking, but Nonoko caught the shift of expression from surprised, to almost ecstatic, before settling on aprehensive apprehensive....
ch19: He realized with a grimace that he was badly failing at not thinking about the sounds on the other side of the door.
ch20: At Koizumi's reminder, in reality a message from Kyon, in reality, Haruhi stilled, staring at the ambulances as they started to move away, her eyes shining.
ch21: Koizmi's Koizumi's ire became visible, though he carefully looked out the window, not meeting anyone's eyes.
ch23: I'd rather not try and explain, this to my mother.
ch23: As a result of that and other accomplishmentds accomplishments, she was the first female NPA officer to ever be promoted to the rank of Special Investigator in the Organized Crime division.
ch23: The statements from the victim's friend friends were uniform, and logical, and didn't have any holes in them....
ch24: For some reason, it felt more tiring than it had previously, almost as though her sliding left her hauling herself through significantly more reistance resistance.
ch25: Still, she was nothing, if not logical.
ch25: I have to admit, I am getting a bit tied tired of all this time travel.
ch26: Instead, he found himself soaring through the cooling night air, gliding almost weightlessly between across the gap, lighting on the roof in a run.
ch27: As a symbol it still posessed possessed meaning.
ch27: As she slowly surveyed the store, it occured occurred to her that frequently, girls her own apparent age also used their phones as status symbols, frequently adding small charms or decorations for individuality.
ch28: "You're cute," Tsusuya Tsuruya said suddenly.
ch29: "No!" Koizumi barked, almost shouting.
ch29: After that, the pair retreated went to the train station near the theater where they were supposed to meet Kyon.
ch29: Yuki was wearing a green blouse with elbow-length sleeves, and a brown-jumper brown jumper with a knee-length skirt.
ch30: Kyouko-chan her here says she's an esper!
ch30: So, Sasaki-san, if you don't believe your associates associates' back stories, why do you ... associate with them?
ch30: The sneer that may had have been directed at Kanae, but he had decided to try and be that protective sempai Kanae adored, so that meant it was being sent to him in any case.
ch31: On the one hand, she wanted to be pleased at the hurt in Sasaki's gaze, and validated that her theory were was correct.
ch33: So, this is something I'm probably better off not thinking about.
ch33: Tanuguchi Taniguchi grumbled around a mouthful.
ch34: I knew you could calculate impossible things things with your unreasonable genius, but that far?
ch35: She'd never been in such a vehicle before, until the last weekend's beach trip, though both Kyon and Tsuruyra Tsuruya seemed to be familiar with it;
ch35: Soon enough, the limousine had come to a stop and the group had trouped out, into a small cleared area lined with somber, well-dressed security personel. personnel.
ch35: She felt stuck struck speechless from the end of the film until they climbed into Tsuruya's waiting limousine.
ch35: Haruhi hadn't liked realizing Koizumi was listening in on her feeings feelings.
ch35: He glanced down, not etirely entirely surprised to see a movie-perfect Chinese kung-fu outfit.
ch35: Kyon asked Taniguchi, deciding that for the sake of Yanagimoto's humilitation humiliation, he'd pretend he hadn't noticed her.
ch35: Yuki found another series of those invuluntary involuntary reactions had almost caused her to spill her tea, so instead patiently set the kettle down.
ch35: Kyon had walked the smaller girl back to her apartment, and then been more than happy to recieve receive a single good-night kiss from her
ch36: Maybe, but if it were secret, I could neither confirm, nor deny it, now could I?
ch37: If I hear word one word that she's not happy because of something you do, then I'll come back to help her out -- with friends.
ch37: Further puzzle pieces began to fit themselves together, her quickly recovering rationale rationality deducing what more of her situation meant.
ch37: Only Kuyou had assembled a construct to investigate the site on the scale the events occured occurred in.
ch38: he said, trailing off as -- unbidden -- a vary very familiar conversation with Haruhi about the same thing replayed itself in his mind.
ch38: Kyon remarked dryly, his voice slightly little tinny in playback.
ch40: Does subtrefuge subterfuge belong here?
ch40: before stopping, bringing her arms down and looping the chord cord into place.
ch44: Her eyes waver wavered with tears at the sight of another assailant with a sword, gesturing his companions back and motioning Kyon to approach for a one-on-one duel.
ch44: "Don't die, Yuki-chan!" when she saw the bloodstained handkerchief wrapped around the smaller girl's hand hand.
ch46: Still -- she wanted to handle as much of the situation surrounding the ninkyou ninkyo dantai organizations that she could, thus freeing him up to deal with ... other issues.  After all, Haruhi had labeled her the director of ninkyou ninkyo dantai operations within the brigade, hadn't she?
ch46: Probably ... we can explain the ninkyou ninkyo dantai aspects of it,
ch47: At different points in their erratic, winding falls, they suddenly shone brighter, shooting away and leaving glowing white trails behind them as they zoomed rapidly away.
ch47: Ignoring the robot nearest her, and staring Kuyou stared at him with a combined look of confusion and ... hope?
ch48: Nonoko's theme song in is Credens Justitiam for this chapter, as she is a firm believer in justice!
ch48: the field was rapidly becoming an a twisted jumble of overturned soil around them.
ch48: /me is Yuki blinked once, then lowered her gaze, frowning slightly.
ch51: The singer couldn't help but hope that at some point in the future, they could go just to sing, instead of to discuss whatever it was that Haruhi was going to tell them.
ch51: It wasn't like Haruhi was trying to press her approach on others as a valid universal solution, after all!
ch52: Haruhi and Tsuruya had been familiar with the outfits, having worn theirs to the restaraunt restaurant together last time.
ch52: There was the time running to the scene -- which was fairly quick, invisibly roof-hopping while Ryouko called up the men who were closed close to Sasaki's location.
ch53: It was harder hard to tell if the Tsuruya heiress or this girl with brown hair were closer to the traditional costume.
ch53: Obviously, she would need to figure out how to include Kanae with Haruhi in keeping a united front and respecting Kyon's engagement to the girl he was adressing addressing as a princess.
ch53: It did mean he got to enjoy it a little less more briefly than he'd have liked
ch54: Pointing out that she spend spent the weekend with her boyfriend wasn't going to make Sakanaka feel better about her situation.
ch54: He was nothing, if not an ambitious man.
ch54: Sasaki saod said, flashing a wry smile.
ch55: Sasaki being thrown into the mix was unexpected entirely entirely unexpected.
ch55: He couldn't very well tell Tsuruya she might be thinking about going to too far when he was considering pointless violence himself, just to assuage his own annoyance.
ch57: Yanagimoto was tempted to break in, but Kunikida -- once Tanugichi Taniguchi had prodded him enough -- managed to maintain some momentum.
ch58: It seemed that the festival she was currently working on planning had no real relationship to the festivals she had participated in in the past.
ch58: Festival traditions that were years centuries old were being pressured to make room for 'professional' outfits.
ch58: Sasaki was fairly certain there was something about alternate Saturdays, but she wasn't sure if that were was a standard thing
ch58: She's hopelessly in love with him, you know ... but he's already engaged, and if he weren't, I don't doubt for a second that Suzumiya-san wouldn't would grab him up.
ch59: She was almost perfectly in harmony with the Chorus; if she were to harmonize anymore any more, she would be another voice singing with the others.
ch61: That's the best I can do, though, so that's what I'd like to give.
ch61: Ryouko had helpfully labeled them 'Sliderbot<em>_005' through 'Sliderbot</em>_012,' along with their range in meters
ch61: And from there he was close enough to completely bisect the core of the robot's oblong chasis with his beam saber, yeilding yielding another great splash of sparks and fluid.

Words misspelled in multiple places (I'm not specifying all the places since global-search-and-replace is easier):

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dependant -> dependent
embarass -> embarrass
shoujou -> shoujo
transfered -> transferred

And a couple more nitpicks that I didn't see a single unambiguous correction for:

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In ch03, Kanae says she started sliding when she was 10 years old. Whereas in ch32, Kanae says she's currently 16 and has been sliding for 4 years.
(Or is she just confused? Since other characters speculate that her memory of this is wrong anyway...)

ch47: "The pressure against Kuyou to conform to the Other's false observations abruptly increased, simultaneous to the arrival of another quartet of the things that had been chasing them -- through the flimsy crystalline barriers between the classroom and the hallway."
Did you mean glass windows? because glass isn't crystalline. (And if Kuyou is directly observing chemical structure rather than using human common knowledge, she wouldn't be mistaken about that.) Otoh, if this is meant to be a shoutout to SoftGlass where any "glass" props that get broken are in fact made of sugar crystal, then well done.

[Brian]

Yikes -- sorry about the delay in replying.  It's a bit daunting to edit all of those chapters to fix the various errors, so I'm doing that very slowly.

One issue that seems to crop up is that I ... might be using UK english on my spellchecker.  At least on one computer.  That'd be a problem.

Okay -- I'll delete my custom library and use a proper dictionary -- go over the entire fic from the ground up starting from tomorrow.  Hehe, that's ... going to be quite a chore.  But not nearly as much as the effort you've gone through to find all those errors!  I can put in the other corrections as I go.  That's pretty staggering; thank you very much for going though that really impressive effort. :p

Regarding the last bit:

And a couple more nitpicks that I didn't see a single unambiguous correction for:

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In ch03, Kanae says she started sliding when she was 10 years old. Whereas in ch32, Kanae says she's currently 16 and has been sliding for 4 years.
(Or is she just confused? Since other characters speculate that her memory of this is wrong anyway...)

Nope, that's the author screwing up.  Relatively, it's been longer, but she should say six, not four.

ch47: "The pressure against Kuyou to conform to the Other's false observations abruptly increased, simultaneous to the arrival of another quartet of the things that had been chasing them -- through the flimsy crystalline barriers between the classroom and the hallway."
Did you mean glass windows? because glass isn't crystalline. (And if Kuyou is directly observing chemical structure rather than using human common knowledge, she wouldn't be mistaken about that.) Otoh, if this is meant to be a shoutout to SoftGlass where any "glass" props that get broken are in fact made of sugar crystal, then well done.

I wish I could be that clever!  Nope.  I'll go with organization of silica 'and other elements' (it is silica, isn't it?) instead.  Sorry about that!

Thanks again for the intimidating list of fixes!

[alethiophile]

Strictly, silica isn't an element; if she's listing off elements, she'd say silicon and oxygen, but that might be a bit cumbersome. Silica and other compounds, maybe.

[Brian]

I'll have to think about this a bit.